My family and I have several reasons in going to Dapitan city. First of all it’s because we were having a family grand reunion in Dipolog city and my parents would like to visit Rizal’s shrine and also it’s our firs time to visit there.
When we arrived in Dipolog city we immediately went to the venue where the reunion was held. We found it hard to get there because we don’t know the place and what’s the ride in going there. The venue was a beach resort owned by one of our relatives. The place was very nice, clean, and comfortable because of the fresh air coming the sea and also the place was surrounded by many trees that’s why it’s so very relaxing after a long trip. Before the program was started there was a mass held to gave thanks to the lord for the safe trip especially for all the participants that comes from far places. When the mass was ended we ate our lunch. There were a lot of food prepared, fruits, dessert and etc. During the program there were a lot of games like bingo, raffle draws, Mario went to town and etc. After the program we went to boulevard to watch the sun set. At night in the venue there were live bands playing classical songs. After two days stay in Dipolog city we went to Dapitan to visit Rizal’s shrine because according to history of our family that one of our grand grandfather was one’s the first student of Rizal and become a sender of his secret notes. We visited some of our relatives and some tourist spot there and then we went home.
This trip was, maybe one of the most unforgettable trip I’ve experienced because I’ve met some of my relatives and have fun with them and most of all the places we been visited, hoping that I’ve come back there soon.
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ReplyDeleteI have noticed a lot of incorrect grammars and also the usage of punctuation markers were not properly put. You have not reviewed your work maybe because you haven't noticed those words that lacks letters. But don't be discouraged to write because at whatever level of writing you have right now, it can be improved. It was also nice of you to have seen that place, I've never been there myself.^^
ReplyDeleteI agree with Ivy. You really have forgotten how to put the necessary punctuations on its proper places. But it's okay, for you can always revise it next time. Just remember that, you should always review your work before writing it down and posting it. And just be careful also on how you punctuate each sentences. I must admit that I've never been there and had never gone to other places like u do. But, somehow i wish to experience it soon. Because i can say that you sure had such a good trip that i even wish to go there too. :)
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